Email sent to our architect last week…
I refer to the plans submitted by e-mail and subsequently by hand on 15th June 2011 concerning the above.
I brought your proposed design to the team meeting today. Generally the feedback is that we are more than happy to accept a contemporary design and welcome designs that demonstrate architectural flair and innovation. There was no adverse concerns over the proposed height of the proposed dwelling. However, it was contended that the overall conceptual design could be improved by incorporating more contemporary elements. It may be that the acceptability of the proposed design is dependant on the design statement and the supporting information that is presently awaited. If the correct materials are proposed for the finish of the dwelling, this will enhance the design. However, the planning service would be open to any further design suggestions that you may have explored and would welcome variations on the proposed design that make the dwelling appear more contemporary.
It should be noted that the presence of the horizontal timber cladding along the upper sections of the dwelling has a slight 1970′s feel and therefore it may be an idea to modify this element in some way. The submission of coloured drawings and details of materials in any subsequent submission would assist with the assessment of the design.
I trust the above is useful. Should you wish to discuss, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Yay! It looks like we’re going to be allowed to have a two storey house!
And just in today…
I have had a chance to review your design justification and the vision statement from the applicant’s and the content of both is noted and provides a good basis for justifying the proposed design elements. However, the following points should be explored further:
I note in your design statement, your comments on the shape of the dwelling refers to the following: “plan tends to square in it’s footprint which affords a more efficient external
wall surface area to building volume ratio as well as responding better to the client’s brief”.In what way does the square footprint lend itself to a more efficient external wall surface? The impact that the overall concept of the square footprint has on the external appearance of the dwelling should be explored and this should be detailed further in the justification.
Justification for the proposed roof shape has not been fully provided other than a “gentle butterfly” roof that would be a green roof. This is quite a significant defining element of the overall design and needs to be justified.
With regard to the proposed windows, it was noted during our meeting that the windows do appear random and in the justification, it is stated:
The positions have been considered to take into account the client brief, orientation, views and overall balance /proportion within a building elevation.
I think that the window sizes and proportions need to be analysed more in this regard (especially in relation to the particular sizes of openings). Perhaps each elevation could be detailed separately and the defining element s relating to the overall appearance of the dwelling detailed for each one.
The external appearance of the dwellinghouse is the major determining factor in the acceptability of a project by the planning service and this should be borne in mind when providing any justification. The clients needs is not a determining factor in assessing the design of any proposal.
At the recent team meeting, it was discussed that the design could be even more creative and innovative than the present submission. This could be undertaken through the use of steel or glass in some way to the external elevations. As stated in my previous response, I indicated that the timber paneling at the top of the building could be modified in some way to appear more contemporary and again this is something that the Planning Service would welcome.
You will appreciate that the design of the dwelling is an issue where conflict of opinion can arise and therefore it is essential that relevant detail is provided in the suppo rting design statement to address any matters that have been raised. I cannot stress enough that the Planning Service fully support innovation in design. It may be that tweaking of minor detailing of the present one (through use of alternative materials) alongside further detailed justification will have a positive bearing on the consideration of the current proposal.I hope the above is useful. If you want to discuss any matters, please do not hesitate to contact me.
I have to say that my favourite statement in the above is:
“The clients’ needs is [sic] not a determining factor in assessing the design of any proposal.”
*sigh*
And I know, I know, you haven’t see the Elevations, yet. Those are on my laptop…which is at the flat. Once I have the laptop back, I’ll be able to upload the elevations. Promise. Although I have to warn you: a very honest relative of mine confirmed that the house looks like — and I quote — a low-income apartment building built during the ’70s in a Northern Ontario industrial town. Still, after what the planners indicated, above, this won’t be a problem for much longer.


